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Critiques
What got me fascinated by his character was how seemingly mundane and ordinary his personality remained through the events, probably inherited from his smuggler father. Until the very end of Revelations I believed he was treading a decent, thought-out and reasonable path between "good" and... the darkness. Traviss really opened my eyes to the relationships that tied those concepts together with responsibility and sacrifice.
Anyway, enough rambling. I'm supposed to critique your piece, so here goes. EXCELLENT choice of reference pose and expression. You made his mundane yet deep brooding look very obvious even though they're both incompatible appearances on a single face. His family traits show, so that's unmistakeably Jacen Solo we got here (like I said, I never really got into the stories about the Solo kids).
What I like the most about your work for him is how it portrays a Sith - obviously - and yet... he looks just like you and I, a simple man with no battle scars, no aggression or marks of trauma. He just happened to become Sith because he chose to. That's everything I "sense" from the expression you gave him.
Now, for the sake of being "fair" in this critique I have to point out a little flaw, though I'm probably just not well awake yet, and that's the size of his hand. I'd have made it a little larger but then again, I'm used to drawing cartoony characters. The amount of time spent into photo-realistic sketching really doesn't allow for error margin and that's one thing you have to battle against in your entire work process. Being the lazy slob that I am it's not something I'd pick up in a thousand years!
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